takin' out the trash
friday night ten-thirty pm I exit the tobacco company down in the slip. four kids in a donked out caprice roll up to the stop at 12th and cary, music bumpin'.
before the car completes its turn three beat cops are chasing it down, guns drawn. pistols stuffed through car windows and into kids faces. shouting ensues.
hands in the air.
out of the car now.
how violated do these kids feel?
crowds of white folk gather to see what the big hoo-ha is. they find the amount of force used inappropriate. I find it offensive.
before all is said and done four squad cars are on the scene. better safe than sorry.
thank you richmond pd.
thank you for keeping our streets squeaky clean.
3 comments:
Are we to assume from your descriptive language that the "four kids in a donked out caprice" were not white? As opposed to the crowd of "white folk" who was obviously separately mentioned. and why is this language separation, while from a less violent standpoint, any less offensive?
Geez, for some reason I wasn't offended by either of those statements. Boy do I feel silly.
okay, gonna' have to hold my hand through this one. are you claiming to be offended by the victims being referred to as four kids in a donked out caprice? or are you just disappointed I didn't use a more colorful term for the white folk onlookers. how's wasps, fancy that one better? either way you're so far askew from the point that I can't help but smell a bit of personal agenda, eh mam?
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